Saturday, August 6, 2011

Finally!

It rained! Phew.

And that thunder? Didn't sound angry so much as it did a sigh of relief, like the whole world was sucking it in. Ahhh.

1 comment:

Scott said...

Em,

These nuggets are the building blocks of great writing. Keep developing them. This description of thunder is so quietly intuitive that I swell with pride. It is seldom great plot twists and storylines that make a writer, it is the quiet descriptions that make the reader see and feel exactly what you intended. Nice Job.

Dad